Seeking feedback on my story-based UX case study

Hello

I’ve been working on writing this case the past couple of days, and I was hoping to hear out some thoughts from others.

The purpose with the article is to 1) share a lesson I learned in my first UX designer position, and 2) show that I’m a reflective designer. It will besides Medium be one out of three case studies on my new portfolio website.

Today I had a meeting with a former recruiter, and her feedback made me radically change the article. So, before I release, I just wanted to hear if others had some thoughts about this new article. Feel free to be honest.

Link to draft article: https://medium.com/@arazcaglar/unifying-two-apps-938686289d05