All right, thank you for your feedback. Interaction design and visual design are not my strengths but I’ll try to justify some of the design decisions you have issues with.
Text mass is always an issue, and I am not an information designer, but I try to be concise, and I cannot see how the information presented can be replaced by graphics. I think images and graphics can support the current content and make it less text heavy but I feel this would only make for more content, and more bloatedness.
The current case study is exhaustive, and is intended as in-depth reading on my process rather than as a result showcase. If I were able to create more case studies, and ones less exhaustive then the current one, I might be able to scale down text in other places, but I simply do not have a lot of projects for which I can write these articles.
The ‘more about me’ list is one of the things i do not love as it is right now. I agree that adding images to personal statements such as home improvement, can make it more relatable but I find it hard to see how I can consistlenty present these statements without adding stock-footage-esque images.
Key statements are made more than once, but really his only regards to my brand statement: “I design digital services to solve problems which I’ve helped define, for users I’ve gotten to know, and for businesses I’ve come to understand”. This is beacuse I intend for the profile page to deliver on it’s own, and not depend on the landing page.
Columns can be precarious but at no point do I use columns to present information that is order-dependent. I do no break content into columns. And while many studies show that reading speed can be negatively affected by left-justified columns, it can have other effects on comprehension.
The career timeline is not intended to be read as a table, but rather as a sequence of entries. The elements do not align to a grid because not all entries have the same number of attributes (location/title), and some attributes need to linebreak. I would not say that the the alternative as shown below is better.