My UX Portfolio feedback

Feedback & Problem Solving
#1

Hi
I am Prateek Agrawal, A UX design fresher and I am hereby attaching my portfolio (https://goo.gl/eQWH8w) which is lined up as the case study. The following project is taken by me itself and all the work is done by me only. I request your valuable feedbacks for the same.
Thank you

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#2

Hi @prateek_agrawalglavv – no problem, I’m happy to help.

  • You’ve done a great job of documenting all the aspects of your process
  • Try to use non-gender specific language (i.e. don’t refer to a user as ‘him’)
  • Your written English is great but I still think your portfolio might benefit from an English edit
  • The overlaid sections are a bit disconcerting (e.g. the user interviews section)
  • The design of the document is a little confusing and hard to follow.

Hope that helps!

#3

Thank you @HAWK I think it must help. Another advice I would like to have is that how do I make it in a following pattern.

#4

I’m not sure I understand the question. Can you try again? :slight_smile:

#5

@HAWK Pardon for my inappropriate sentence. I am actually pointing out to the last point in the feedback which you have mentioned. I would really need to know that how could I make this document seems easy to understand and intuitive to follow?
Thanks