This forum exists to help aspiring UX designers, so it’s probably a bit much to expect a free usability audit. As you said, it’s not in great shape—if you’re the owner and are serious about creating a site that converts prospects into customers for your hotel, then I would recommend you engage a professional designer to work with you on this. Here are some early wins:
The biggest hurdle that is hurting you is the email signup box that appears within seconds of arriving. Not only is it really intrusive, but it’s sometimes impossible to close this box (there is a “close” link, but a) it’s almost impossible to see, and b) doesn’t work every time anyway, leaving the user stuck with a signup form they may not want to fill out and no other option but to close their browser window)
The site is not currently mobile-friendly. I don’t know any statistics on mobile usage in the Indian Hotel industry, but you’d be ignoring global trends of mobile usage at your peril by note implementing a responsive design.
Your carousel is not doing anything for you but take up screen real estate
The copywriting is sub-standard and needs to be rewritten from scratch. Engage a professional writer who is a native English speaker. They will help you refine your proposition and unique selling point so that you can make visitors to your site WANT to come and stay. At the moment the text on your site does not do that
[*]The menu items also don’t make sense to me. I suspect you would benefit from researching who it is you’re targeting, and putting yourself in their shoes to ask what information they need when looking for a hotel in your area.
[/LIST] Hope that’s helpful, sorry if it’s harsh.