Ok, my takeaways:
I need some sort of banner or photo at the top. I am not very good at adding things for visual appeal, so thank you for that! I have no idea what I might want to put there, though.
Too many words! A known problem of mine, yes. Will work on making things simpler and clearer and shorter.
Too uncertain. Interesting, and makes sense! I'm uncertain because I'm new, but I bet I'll be uncertain no matter what because there's always stuff to learn. So I need to just state things (which will also help with the too many words problem).
Good that I'm including the process and photos/screenshots of my work. Yay! I tried to make sure those things were there.
So... I'm not yet sure what direction I want to go in for UX. That's why I don't have much story. It's a good point, though, and something I should work on. Maybe I can come up with a story about that? Hmm...
Thanks for the feedback, everyone!