Alright I have had a look at both and I have feedback. I have to warn you I have a habit of being brutally honest but I try very hard to be constructive
I have a lot of feedback and I promise I only want to help you.
Starting with this one:
So let’s start with the good:
I love a grey colour scheme it’s clean and elegant and from a content perspective I think you have the beginnings of something amazing.
The constructive criticism:
It really confused me. Scrolling through I wasn’t 100% sure what I was looking at- as in where each section ended and where new ones began. The visual workflow just didn’t work for me. I definitely feel that it would be better if it told a story and if it was clearer how many stories were there. I kinda felt I had to work for the information and not everyone will do that. Not really a fan of the footer - don’t send me somewhere else when I came to see your whole portfolio.
I also cannot tell where you are based- I think it’s great that you’ve lived overseas but where’s home? I also don’t like that your resume takes me somewhere else. Also, at least one of those links to the mock ups was broken - the first one was. That’s the one people would click on and if it doesn’t work that could be it and that would be a real shame because you have serious potential. There’s also a lot of text too.
Ok the other one now:
Great photo! It’s a really strong opening.
I like the tree- I usually hate things that move but that tree gets away with it because it’s cool and soothing to watch.
The constructive stuff:
So I click the about me button hoping to find your story but instead it scrolls a little and I find out I’m looking at your side project. Nothing wrong with a side project, but I was expecting to see your story not what you get up to in your free time.
This annoyed me too: [h=5]Nominated For Multiple Design Awards[/h] That’s great but which ones and what for??? Those questions come to mind when I see that plonked in a divider. Where’s the ‘so-what’ factor I guess is what I’m asking. Tell us more about you and your story. I’ve been nominated for some big awards too but the story behind them is so much more interesting
This: [h=6]A collection of my works and passions[/h] I would expect for this to lead to your portfolio - I can’t find a link on this site to your portfolio. Why are they separate? I know one is your side project but I kinda feel it should all be together or at least connected in some way.
I also found grammatical errors and am not a fan of the way the text moves on some pages.
On this page: http://www.titanstudio.net/design.html
There is a different tree- why? The other one is awesome and would help with consistency.
Look I could go into great detail with this feedback but right now I’m going to stop because I think that’s enough for now. If you’re still reading this, I’d really like to help you make this the best it can be because I think it just needs refining. The bones are there and they’re good. I’m snowed under until after WIAD but after that I’d like to test your site for you. I have access to remote testing tools (opens in the browser) and I want to put them through those tools to see what happens. I’d need your help rounding up participants but I reckon we could do it
PS My website is terrible and I’m going through the same process!